Hi guys,
I wrote a new pop song called '' If I wasn't here''. The song is about leaving your hometown or town you live in for a new and better place.
I'm not a native English speaker so please let me know if there are any errors and what you think about the song in general:
If I wasn't here
(Intro)
Na na na, na na na na
Na na na, na na na na
Na na na, na na na na
Na na na, na na na na
(Verse)
Time supposed to heal
all the scars in me
Like an autumn tree
with its changing leaves
Tonight I'll leave and leave behind the dark old me
Mondays flashing by
Like a satellite
that got lost in time
Have I lost my mind
if I tell lies to avoid to break the ice?
(Prechorus)
But tonight
it's time to think about the things that we like
It's time to let go all the things that we're tired of
And what we're tired of can not be found in our new town
(Chorus)
If I wasn't here tonight
This place would still be on my mind
wondering if I should try
try to find what I can't hide
It didn't take long to find
another home my mind and I
feel like we are in line
try to find what you can't hide!
(Verse 2)
No more watching paint dry
No more invented lies
Cause what we used to hide
is about to run dry
It's time leave and leave behind the dark old me
(Prechorus)
Cause tonight
it's time to think about the things that we like
It's time to let go all the things that we're tired of
And what we're tired of can not be found in our new town
(Chorus)
(Intro)
(Chorus)