[ScottLevi]

Hey Steng,

Dig it to be fair. I like the subject matter and think the lyrics portray the story quite well, as a message of strength and defience but with glimmers of voulnerability. Nice balance IMO.

Like others I thought your voice was cool and quite current sounding.

I really liked the instrument that came in at 1.10 and that whole break was extra funky.

I have a soft spot for heavy ramp-downs and jumping back in and almost definately yearn for them way too much, but that said I think doing such a thing at about 2.10 could sound awesome, jumping back in at "You know what? I'm invincible!"

This was right up my street overall and felt very well made. Reminded me of The Foals a little which is a good thing too!

All the best,
Scott.

[Steng]

Refused, Morefrog, Boolio and Scott - thanks so much for the feedback (and for listening in the first place). Scott I'll check out your advice and see if it can tweak - always looking to better my stuff with input from others - appreciate it mate.

[pompeyjazz]

After a few listens this is developing into a right earworm. Lots going on here. Interesting lyrics, great  :)vibe. Keep it up man 

[Jamie]

Hi , very interesting, your vocal has an unusual tone and style (in a good way ). Liked the guitars and the overall vibe. Nice sparse arrangement which meant the individual elements had to shine which they largely did.
Nice one!
Cheers
Jamie

[shadowfax]

Interesting song..like the lyrics, drums become a bit monotonous after a while though IMHO..
Vocal suites the track I reckon,
good work mate..

[Steng]

Interesting song..like the lyrics, drums become a bit monotonous after a while though IMHO..
Vocal suites the track I reckon,
good work mate..

Thanks for the feedback - yeah I agree, the drums need some work, I'll maybe add some spice on the chorus. Cheers.