[Misanthropist]

OUT

One day I might be a king
and put on all my bling
but at a glimpse
I hate being a prince

Hide me in the woods indeed
Your picnic is all I need
please share wth me your stale bread
and the cursed cloud ahead

I'm out-out-out
You're out-out-out


Out is what I don't dred
now that I'm well fed
and you want no hassle
from that castellated castle

you told me old bean
you're not frightfully keen
on the old guillotine

there's no time to wince
my dear peasant prince
I think we should hop it
before they drop it

I'm out-out-out
You're out-out-out

[irwin]

Hi Hope you are having a good day.

I am trying to understand why you posted this lyric, it has only 10 lines. Do you just want to know if you are off to a good start or it was just a thought that came to you and you wanted some advice?

For me it is too short and it  confused me.

[Misanthropist]

Thanks for showing interest.I hope the finished version of OUT is ok. Don't worry too much about being confused,for me confusion is the core of all I know.....