Lost Souls (Pop)

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« on: January 02, 2023, 12:49:10 PM »

Hi
a bit of a change in style for this song , thought i would try something
thats not RNB or chill out
Its a Pop Song , with some vocal chops

http://subvibe.synology.me:5000/as/sharing/s858yT1t/L211c2ljL0xvc3QgU291bHMubXAz

Thanks for Listening & all Comments welcome

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« Reply #1 on: January 02, 2023, 02:51:20 PM »
Mmmm, that was lovely. I have no feedback for any improvements; it's so smooth and nice. I love the mix of electronic and guitars, and the production is on-point. A few catchy bits in there that are still going through my head after listening. Very well done.

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« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2023, 09:14:40 PM »
Really love this...a great mix of traditional and modern...full of energy and momentum....really well produced....a radio ready song...top effort

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« Reply #3 on: January 03, 2023, 11:53:14 AM »
@subvive

I really like this song and production.  It's instantly accessible and very enjoyable. 

I have one suggestion only: to bring the acoustic guita chords in slightly before the bar. It wiould then fit together seamlessly.  The precision of bringing them in on the bar almost sounds out of time, though I am aware that this is not the case.   

It's simply quality!

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« Last Edit: January 03, 2023, 11:55:31 AM by Wicked deeds »

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« Reply #4 on: January 04, 2023, 12:18:25 AM »
What a great song. I love the arrangement and production here. A great mix of old and new. A really strong vocal where it matters but with some more current stuff happening too. I love that snatch of guitar towards the end. I think this is a really classy track. Excellent :)

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« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2023, 03:03:09 PM »
It has all the colors I like in music, very cool, smooth, modern, pop, fusion, and fine sound!!!
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