.Don't Blame Me ... finished i think

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Elvis Nash

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« on: May 28, 2024, 05:43:04 AM »



Why you calling me up today
How ya get my number anyway
What cha mean I was hitting on your girl
I'm not the one who wrecked her whole world
Ch
Don't blame me
I'm not the one who left her lonely
I just noticed her heart was breaking
She never said she was taken
I'm not the one who set her free
So don't blame me
Don't blame
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She was all alone in that corner bar
Crying you cheated she was all torn apart
Then she said how much it hurt
I thought to myself how could someone do that to her
Ch
bridge
I'm not sure what you thought you could prove
She's not coming back to you , you fool
Ch

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« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2024, 09:54:49 AM »
Hi @Elvis Nash

I know I joke about not liking country music, but I will say that this is excellent all round.

Apart from the production (which is up to commercial release standard), the song contains all the elements for what I consider makes a great song.

It has a great hook / chorus, dynamics and variety in the arrangement. I think you constantly succeed in creating a reason for the listener to come back to your music if they are a fan of this genre.

10/10

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« Reply #2 on: May 28, 2024, 11:36:02 AM »
I joke around with country music all the time Nick , We all live in small towns on dirt roads and fish , If someone says something to complicated. "Well you gotta be rich to even think that way partner" .
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« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2024, 12:07:14 PM »
Hola

I didn't know what I was going to hear...and I loved it, it has a very fresh, enveloping sound and the voice, any FX? It stands out great in the mix without the arrangement getting lost behind.
Very nice melodies and changes, catchy, a different story, another person's broken love, very good job!! Suena genial!!! @Elvis Nash
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Elvis Nash

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« Reply #4 on: May 28, 2024, 12:36:37 PM »
I don't know what FX is Mora , BZ Lewis mixed it in Dolby Atmos mix . its a full day job doing it, This is stereo mix . I'll use the Dolby on You tube mix , It's like 555mb ,It  takes a half hour to load .  There's a trillion plug ins and gadgets , I let the producer deal with that , To much hype. it gives me a headache watching them vids.  You either got a decent song or you don't . no matter how many toys you use . Well enough on music , I wonder if the catfish are biting today ? This raccoon under my mobile home mansion , sounds like he went to Home Depo and is building something at 3am . Well it keeps the dog amused .
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« Reply #5 on: May 28, 2024, 02:32:44 PM »
Hi Elvis,

Great song, cant mistake the genre haha, seriously really enjoyed the song it has all the elements you look for in a good country song. Was quite surprised you used  Dolby Atmos on it as I had been told it made the singer sound as if they were further away from the mix, that definately didn't show here the mix sounds great, great song, well done,
George

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Elvis Nash

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« Reply #6 on: May 28, 2024, 04:46:37 PM »
I know 0 about mixes , I watch in studios turning the dials and gadgets , so I know a little about it .  I try to shut and not ask stupid questions , what's that do ?
BZ Lewis said its the new gadget  Dolby Atmos. Ok use it . I remember analog tape ( Vaguely) A big board and riding faders .  I make sure each line works then I leave , I don't wanna hear myself a 100 times , Let him deal with it in peace .BZ Lewis

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« Reply #7 on: May 29, 2024, 10:43:30 AM »
@Elvis Nash  Fabulous production, so whoever is helping you with it is doing a great job :)  At least as good as anything you would hear on the radio,  this is another excellent piece of modern country rock. Well done, Kevin

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« Reply #8 on: May 29, 2024, 01:29:50 PM »
Producers: Justin Morgan BZ Lewis Gavin Jones, there's a few more session players not mentioned . Its a lot of work , Start to finish . Well for them , I don't do much really ,I'm kinda lazy . do you wanna sing this again ? well it probably won't be any better then the last 4 takes , So I'm going fishing.
thanks man