Hi there, new to the forum and looking for some honest, unbiased feedback/constructive criticism.
This song is called "Looking Through a Lens" and is about how we sometimes miss moments because we're too busy trying to capture them.
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Lyrics:-
Sometimes, I think, sometimes,
We're too busy looking through a lens, to see whats on the other end.
And, sometimes, I think sometimes,
We're the ones with the shutters on 'cause we can't see what's going on.
Pictures flash before my eyes,
Sometimes I don't realise,
They're the ones who are smiling,
And I'm outside the frame.
I don't want to be negative,
But there's not much that I wouldn't give,
To be the one who's smiling...
To be the one who's smiling...
Sometimes, I feel I've tried,
To capture the moment for so long, I didn't notice when the moment's gone.
And, sometimes, I think, sometimes,
I've gotta put the camera down, lift up my head and look around.
Pictures flash before my eyes,
Sometimes I don't realise,
They're the ones who are smiling,
And I'm out of the shot.
I don't want to be negative,
But there's not much that I wouldn't give,
To be the one who's smiling...
To be the one who's smiling... But I'm not.
Sometimes, I see the bigger picture,
'cause life is just a fixture,
And it's hanging on my wall.
Then I, I finally realise,
I see the world through both my eyes,
And I'm not sad at all.
Pictures flash before my eyes,
And suddenly I realise,
I'm the one who's smiling,
At all those memories.
The photographs that I look through,
Remind me what we used to do,
And we'll be forever smiling,
We'll be forever smiling, me and you.
Me and you.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Thanks,
Sam.