[Saeed AlSuri]

Hello every body ..

I wrote this song last night .. it's in 12 Bar Rock n Roll .. while trying to make a blues feel out of 12 Bars  1 4 5 progression .. while strumming .. Looking for love every where .. pop on my lips .. 10 minutes later .. the fist verse is done .. two hours later the chorus was done .. I think the easiest .. maybe some of you will feel the weakest .. and 10 minutes ago finished the last verse ..

So here it is ..

Cheers ..

  Unkind World .. 21-22/8/2013 ..


V1
Looking for love every where ..
But I couldn't find ..
Looking for love .. to share ..
the World is unkind ..
looking every where .. here and there .. even looking behind ..

Chorus :
It's Blowing my mind .. I need to unwind ..
And love to find ..

V2 :
How many times I meet people .. I call friends ..
How many of those people .. have stabbing hands ..
How many ways .. No matter the praise .. Lies you'll find ..

Chorus :
It's Blowing my mind .. I need to unwind ..
And love to find ..

V3:
What should I do .. When people are Unkind ..
Looking for their own .. Killing every one behind ..
What should I do .. Tell me it's true .. I'm not Blind ..

Chorus :
It's Blowing my mind .. I need to unwind ..
And love to find ..

Saeed AlSuri .. copyright  © 2013 ..

[BooBoo]

Love the way how easily the chorus fits with verses, flows so well. I really don't think the chorus is weak at all. I feel like V1 could also work as a bridge to the song as well as a verse. Good song.

[Saeed AlSuri]

Thank you BooBoo ..

Very nice of you .. and thanks for the kind words ..

Cheers ..

[terrysains]

Flows like a river, love it. Terry.

[Saeed AlSuri]

Thank Terry ..

Cheers ..

[PeeJay]

Hi Saeed,

This guy has alot on his plate having to deal with two-faced people and trying to find love at the same time.

Reminded of that song 'Back Stabbers'.

Nice one,

Phil.

[Saeed AlSuri]

Absolutely right Peejay ..

That's what life is all about .. Facing dilemmas day in and day out .. until we leave ..

thanks ..

Cheers..

[Jess]

I really like the verses in this, and like everyone else has said, it flows so well. I'm not familiar with the 12 bar style, but if it's anything as good as your other stuff, this is going to be great to music

[KEVIN B]

H Saeed,
             good track, hope this is all made up, and not from experience !!

love second verse, simple, but very, very true mate !

i cant wait to hear it, doesn't sound rock n roll to me, i must say, but having listened to all your other stuff, i'm sure you will put your own stamp on it.

so looking forward to the listen !

nice one Saeed 

kev !

[Saeed AlSuri]

Thank you Kevin ..

Still working on a riff to start the song .. and the verse melody not yet happy with .. so it'll take some time ..

I think many people live the 2nd verse .. one time or another in their lives .. must be .. 

Cheers ..