[Cameron F]

Verse 1 -
Your time has come, your ship has sailed,
I've waited desperately to unveil,
The secrets that I hold,
Inside my mind

Verse 2 -
We've gone the highest heights,
Long days and even longer nights,
But now we're falling,
to the ground

Chorus -
We can't keep going anymore,
Yeah we are falling to the floor,
We can't redo, we can't rewind,
No second chance, no second try,
It's all over now, good bye

Verse 3 -
I hope your happy, now your free,
You don't need us, you don't need me,
Yeah we let go,
So easily

Feedback's always appreciated, cheers

[jonpromos]

Sounds like a breakup. Good job. I got it on the second read. Avoid easy rhymes if you can. But if not, stick with it. Don't force anything. Also, get used to using "you're" at the right places because the wrong use of it may interrupt the reading flow.