I'm 15 years old, and aspiring songwriter, I want to improve and get better, so if you could give me some advice, that would be cool.
This is a pop/punk style song, that would be sung by someone like Avril Lavigne. Its actually based around someone I know, so the lyrics are, exactly how I feel, Tell me what you think
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Wake Up
I've been so annoyed at you lately,
Words can't even express the hurt
I've known it was coming a long time
But now you're treating me like dirt.
All the things you do and say keep running through my mind.
All your so called "new friends" are using you alright.
But you can't see what's going on
You might as well be blind!
Hey girl, its time to wake up
This isn't gonna last, so you've gotta grow up.
Now you're gonna have to pick up,
Where you last left off,
It's gonna be tough,
So you've gotta wake up.
I'm sick and tired of waiting
For you to come back around,
You're not the girl I used to know,
You need to get you're feet back on the ground
All the things you do and say keep running through my mind
We used to be so cool, but now it feels like I'm being ignored,
I think you owe me an explanation,
So if you could find the time...
Hey girl, its time to wake up
This isn't gonna last, so you've gotta grow up.
Now you're gonna have to pick up,
Where you last left off,
It's gonna be tough,
So you've gotta wake up.
Why don't we try again,
Why don't we start again,
I'm willing to forget,
So if you could try and remain sober...
Hey girl, its time to wake up
This isn't gonna last, so you've gotta grow up.
Now you're gonna have to pick up,
Where you last left off,
It's gonna be tough,
So you've gotta wake up.
Hey girl, its time to wake up
This isn't gonna last, so you've gotta grow up.
Now you're gonna have to pick up,
Where you last left off,
It's gonna be tough,
So you've