Thanks for the responses Guys, I appreciate it.
Paulski
I know what you mean about the story switching to talking about the guitar in the second verse,
but I am trying to get accross a true account of how the story goes,
When i was 20, A friend of mine showed up at my house out of the blue with an old classical guitar, and said try this, I took it to my Dad who lived about a 120 miles away and he showed me how the basics of how to work it, but then gave me his steel string guitar, the sentiment in the second verse is a true account of how i felt about it, i dint ever want to put it down, it didnt feel right.
I guess what i am saying in a long winded way is how the story is about my relationship with my Dad and the guitar,
Do you think that witching so dramaticaly between the two is too confusing to a first time listener?
I see how going from a he to a she could make someone do a double take.
Vintage,
Togeather we've "earned some dings"
A ding is what generally describes knocks / imperfections in a guitars finish.
Im using it as a metaphore for going through some rought times and coming out the other side.
we've been high, low and in between
togeather weve earned some dings.
a little rought around the edges
but just hear her when she sings
The lines that bother me are in that same verse
This old box became a friend of mine
a companion to ths day
anything i tried to say
she knew exactly what to play
What i am trying to say is, there is an instinctive connection between the player and the guitar knowing what each other is trying to convey, but the wording doesnt sit right for me, But as i say maybe im too close to it.
Thank you both for the feedback, any more wouldbe appreciated.