Benjo!
I like this , but im a little confused. Has this guy hit rock bottom, or is he just down and out for one night? " I roll a smoke n get high" suggests money in his pocket. "Ive got to learn to say no" suggests the same, if he's got nothing, "No" goes without saying. He doesn't have to learn, he's got no choice. Is he sleeping neath the stars, till he can find someplace new? Sorry, if im raining on your parade, its good, but not clear.