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A Kiss Before The Winter

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« on: March 24, 2015, 11:14:54 PM »
Waiting to be recorded 😄

A kiss Before The Winter

I drove a lonely mile,
rolling fields of green.
I left her love behind
with the things we'd done
And the sights we'd seen.

I travelled east to west,
then in reverse again.
I stood alone once more
'neath the charcoal skies
in the pouring rain

October takes me in her arms.
A kiss before the winter.
October skies have come to take me home.

Where faces stare and smile,
where hands reach out to heal,
where children know the way,
Where parents fail
to close the deal

October takes me in her arms.
A kiss before the winter.
October skies have come to take me home.

I awake in the night.
remember the joy.
my first born boy knows of pain.

October takes me in her arms.
A kiss before the winter.
October skies have come to take me home.

Written by Paul Vasey

tomcrocus

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« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2015, 10:02:19 AM »
Hello paul,
               i like this a lot,"A kiss before the winter",that's a great
title and i love those lines,i'm assuming this is about a relationship
break up,please explain a little,
        "I awake in the night.
         i remember the joy.
         my first born boy knows of pain",very good,
correct me if i'm wrong,well done,
                                               tom.

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« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2015, 11:38:19 AM »
Hi Tom, I'm sitting in The World museum in Liverpool. I've been staying with my partner in the North West for a few weeks whilst recovering from a car accident.  I lived in the North East all of my life until my marriage (a twenty six year relationship) ended almost two years ago. I met a beautiful woman from Liverpool and now spend a great deal of time here when I'm not at work. When I return to the North East, my journey is initially through beautiful countryside "rolling fields of green".  I travel "east to west", then  "in reverse again". I then reflect on the wonderful experiences shared with my new partner " the things we've done, the sights we've seen". This is a song about my beautiful summer of 2014 and how it hurts to return to my home town, especially at the onset of the winter (which is now of course, coming to an end) :-)  It's lovely to return back to the North East and especially to be with my two boys who are 11 and twelve years old but it's also a place of uncomfortable memories. I knew the winter would be a difficult time. A kiss before the winter, hints at the harshness of what is to come. It's not a pleasant kiss, The winter embraces me, the cold weather, dark nights and limited contact with my children all require great resilience. Upon returning to my home town, I'm there 'neath the charcoal skies" in the literal and metaphorical "pouring rain" - A bitter-sweet place to be - it's where my heart belongs - "Where hands reach out to heal" - a reference to the love of my children. It's too often acceptable/convenient to abandon love and family ties for new experiences. I believe in working at relationships but you can't make somebody feel the way that you do.  I worry about the impact of all of this on my children.

A little cryptic at times - that can often be my style. Thank you so much for reviewing.

Paul
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jamieF

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« Reply #3 on: March 26, 2015, 12:12:20 PM »
I love this song.
Epitaph on a blues singers tombstone: "I didn't wake up this morning......"

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« Reply #4 on: March 26, 2015, 07:59:37 PM »
Hey Paul

This is a great write IMO. I love that you personify October that way.
And before reading your explanation I could tell this came from the heart.

Only prob is there is nothing to nit-pick!

Nice one!
(another) Paul

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« Reply #5 on: March 26, 2015, 10:43:07 PM »
Hello paul,
               thanks for explaining it to me,best wishes with
the recording,
                    tom.

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« Reply #6 on: March 27, 2015, 07:07:37 AM »
I couldn't make heads not tails about what this meant.... and I didn't mind at all.  The emotion was all there, and it was more than enough to make this totally compelling.  The explanation made sense of it... but it didn't need any "sense." 

Beautiful lyric that could mean many things to each person who reads/listens.  This is what lyrics are supposed to do. . . make us feel and tell just enough story to give the feelings something to cling to. 

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« Reply #7 on: March 29, 2015, 02:57:38 PM »
I like lyrics that leave you wondering and that's precisely what happened here.

I could apply the lyrics to situations in my own life that may be very different from their intended story.

Great imagery and the short chorus just works perfectly.