Hello jake,
i'm not saying your other lyrics aren't songs as i'm sure they
are to you but i'm definitely getting a tune in my head with this one,i'm
not sure if it's the same tune you've got in your head but it's a tune all
the same.
"One more time a second chance
nine more lives,the shaman's chant"
"I'm a nine live Cheshire-grinning cat
never landing on my back"
"A split second shock surrender
for a split second forever after"
Iv'e picked out a few of your more tame lines there,
you're bizarre man but in a very good way.
I hope you get the feedback you deserve but i think
some members may be a bit daunted by the eccentricity
that's coming out of your head,good luck,
tom.
