[dkemmerer]

I wrote this song a year ago.  I wanted to write songs that as many people as possible can relate to, and the topic of longing and heartbreak is cliche, but effective.

Please let me know what you think, and reach out to me.  Thank you so much!!

david.r.kemmerer@gmail.com

[tboswell]

Nice commercial sounding song, which you perform very well.

For me I found the subject matter and music lacking a little in a hook that really caught my ear and made it memorable. So I enjoyed it while it was playing but it didn't leave a lasting impression.

You are a obviously a talented performer and fine guitarist, and the presentation is excellent.

FYI most people post the lyrics with the songs to allow people to read them and provide a more effective critique.

Please do listen and post responses on other peoples songs and more people will respond you your songs.

Thanks for sharing! 

Tom.