We're Merely Dreaming

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ScottLevi

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« Reply #15 on: November 13, 2016, 09:13:15 PM »
Hey Rightly,

Wonderful lyricism as always, feel like you do an awesome job at making us as the listener emphasise as your feeling seeps through in abundance.

I'm not awfully great at categorising music so not sure if this quantifies to Jazz, but that doesn't matter to me at least good music is good music, and this maintains that trademark honesty and guitar that has been attracting me to your music since I first heard it.

I am noticing a theme of not having a chorus, but putting together a really strong and melodic title-line which is pretty damn cool - might have to give it a try myself; plenty to learn from your expertise and creativity so thanks for continuing to share.

All the best.

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« Reply #16 on: November 14, 2016, 12:57:31 PM »
Hey Rightly,

Wonderful lyricism as always, feel like you do an awesome job at making us as the listener emphasise as your feeling seeps through in abundance.

I'm not awfully great at categorising music so not sure if this quantifies to Jazz, but that doesn't matter to me at least good music is good music, and this maintains that trademark honesty and guitar that has been attracting me to your music since I first heard it.

I am noticing a theme of not having a chorus, but putting together a really strong and melodic title-line which is pretty damn cool - might have to give it a try myself; plenty to learn from your expertise and creativity so thanks for continuing to share.

All the best.

thanks for the comments
I've never thought of myself as an expert.
thinking about... it, I do sometimes feel satisfied with my lyric writing efforts
my voice can sometimes be ok
music, composition, I think I've a good way to go
With the guitar, I'm unconventional, and in some ways very, very limited - I can't really jam -

I seem to be learning and having a lot of fun
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #17 on: November 17, 2016, 10:19:54 AM »
Missed this one somehow ???
you have an interesting talent and style but you really gotta try and make your songs sound better my friend..production and arrangement is important..it really is!!
you asked me in a post if I thought I was still learning..God damn right I'm still learning :) :)
you never stop learning in the music business..
I wish you well mate..have a go at refining your sound a little on each song.. :) :)

best to you, Kevin
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