Hello there dinnewithgreedo,
This is another fine song. I think it's obvious to the regular visitors to this forum that you consistently present quality songs, accompanied by fine vocals. I enjoy the limited use of instruments which allow me to see how much potential your music has. You're a very good writer and any suggestions that I might offer would only be catering for my own preferences. Keep on doing exactly what you are at the moment. The only thing that is needed for your wonderful songs, is a polished production and recording, which I feel would communicate just how good your talent is. I've read on previous posts that the world could do with a greedo album and I'm inclined to believe that this is true!
Thanks for sharing,
Paul