I was blocked in my songwriting for the past few years, Its now starting to flow and I just started out. I would like feedback on my lyrics.
My house, This house
This in the house that Jack never built
This very old house
Vying for a roof over my head
My house is in pieces
The bricks and the stones
Will break my bones
The wind will huff and puff and blow my house down
Me living in my little room
Need to run for cover
Hurricane Jose will huff and puff
He will blow my house down
My house
My very old house
My very old and self-destructive house
The Bricks and stones
Will break my bones
But my life you can never take away from me
My house my very old and self-destructive house
The house I’m living
My house
It’s the house that Jack never built
The land of my very old house.
