[Almosthumanrobot]

Hey guys, this is a song I wrote a while ago. It's about helping someone who is feeling down or outright depressed. The main message is that the people around someone who is hurting are getting hurt too, just by emphatizing with that person.
Hope you guys like it, I tried out something different with the instrumentation, let me know what you think about it!

https://soundcloud.com/themis2/nullify

Nullify:

Won't you see with me
We could look at all these stars
Won't you be with me
We could lay with chasin cars

There's so many
So much
So many things I'm not

There's so many
So much
So many things I forgot

You hide from the light
It's not hard
You denied yourself right
From the start

And it's turning around in your head
It's me who is hurting instead

Won't you see with me
We can try to nullify
Won't you be with me
We would be all high and dry

There's so many
So much
So many things I'm not

There's so many
So much
So many left untouched

You hide from the light
It's not hard
You denied yourself right
From the start

And it's turning around in your head
It's me who is hurting instead

And those ravens
They come out of here
They are hunting
For the ones who fear
But this secret
You gotta know my dear
They won't catch us

You hide from the light
It's not hard
You denied yourself right
From the start

And it's turning around in your head
It's me who is hurting instead

[LostBoy]

Hello mate,
I really enjoyed your track. Right up my street. Nice catchy chorus, with a great vocal style/delivery. The music has wonderful ebbs and flows. Excellent work mate.

A couple of things minor things that flagged up on my listens
At 2.40 to my ears the timing on the drum transition into “and the ravens” is just a smidge off and at 2.51 there is a weird noise over the word “they”....oh, and that end is very abrupt mate?

That’s all I’ve got. Keep em coming dude. 

[redrhodie]

This is really pretty. I like it a lot. Love the harmonies. Really cool. It builds up as it goes, which really I'm really into, and kept me enchanted the whole way through. Very nice!

[Skub]

Yo Almosthumanrobot.

This is a lovely,delicate piece.

Enchanting is a word which springs to mind.

The song suits the minimalistic production,the spaces work for the song.

The abrupt ending spoiled it a little for me,but then I've a thing about song endings!

[Almosthumanrobot]

Hey guys thanks so much for listening and for the feedback!
@LostBoy Thanks for the concrete feedback man, this is stuff I can really do something with!
@redrhodie Thanks you soo much!
@Skub Yeah the ending is a little abrupt, you commented on the ending of my last song as well. I'll be sure to give more attention to it for my next songs.