Nice yo see some of your material pop up, and in all honesty you hooked me in with the title straight away. Short powerful lines on the lyrics reinforce that - like when people say rockstars take hours to look like they've just come out of bed - is how this lyric comes accross - effortless attitude and genius.
Trying to get these reviews done before conking out with a smoke, but will be back 'specially for a second level of appreciated post-medication later as there's plenty of levels of drift into
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Took it completely your own direction and can see how you've really embraced the drums into the loving arms of the rest. Have to give those vocals a shout-out too.
Hope you keep at it dude, the world might fail you but it needs yah music.
All the best,
Scott.