hello again my friends
I have a recording i made yesterday it was written on the spot so im sure its less than perfect, but i ask for your opinions on the idea, does it work as a 'song', is it clearly defined, as in genre? is it interesting/boring? or is it even any good?
As i say i wrote this yesterday so i haven't had the time to decide whether its shiny gold or rotten turd hehe
Anyway please let me know what you think.. my brain seems unable to decide where to go or what it needs..
Heres the all important link!-
http://soundcloud.com/dankepig/recurring-dream*Lyrics
The weather’s still angry outside
The raindrops on the glass, reflecting the mask
That he wears most of the time
The weather’s the same in his mind
He has a recurring dream he’s still a part of the scene
And when he wakes you’re still by his side..
Not to be unkind, but
It’s the end of the line
She said..
He’s addicted now, bring him down, make him sleep
He’s convicted now to a dead man’s dreams
So then he was left to decide
To get on the mend, or to go round the bend
Find somewhere lonely to hide
Now there’s a permanent glaze in his eyes
It’s clear that he went on an instant descent
And made friends with the demons in his mind..
Oh please don’t remind him
Of good times
He says their dead..
He’s addicted now, make him wake, just to sleep
While they concrete him down to a never ending street..
I think its too late for him now
He tries to make things work, but ends face down in dirt
Every time he opens his mouth..
Hope you like it!! please let me know what you think.. Gary