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moraamarolaloba

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« on: May 29, 2024, 10:52:18 AM »
Hola a todos!
This one is different, a bit gitana and mysterious, I hope...




I run I run I r un
the night is cold
I run I run I run
the fog wraps the street lamps

I run I run I run
leaving behind
the steam of my breath
of my breath

Streets and more streets
with no name

North South East West
the Rose of Winds
is slept
in the bones of yesterday
I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
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« Reply #1 on: May 29, 2024, 04:47:19 PM »
@moraamarolaloba Another inventive piece. Some great ideas going on in the music that work well in supporting your distinctive vocals. And your lyrics are , as always poetically intruging. (And nice video :) ) Kevin

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« Reply #2 on: May 29, 2024, 08:43:31 PM »
@moraamarolaloba Another inventive piece. Some great ideas going on in the music that work well in supporting your distinctive vocals. And your lyrics are , as always poetically intruging. (And nice video :) ) Kevin

Gracias @kevysc
I had to run a lot hahaha I like it too. Thank you so much.
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« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2024, 03:45:32 PM »
Another interesting song from you, @moraamarolaloba .. as always moody and intriguing. Some lovely eastern sounds and lovely instrument choices. Gorgeous arrangement.

Another one to add of the list of songs of yours that I love!

K


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« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2024, 08:34:19 PM »
Another interesting song from you, @moraamarolaloba .. as always moody and intriguing. Some lovely eastern sounds and lovely instrument choices. Gorgeous arrangement.

Another one to add of the list of songs of yours that I love!

K



Hola @MonnoDB
Contenta reverte! That you so much, Appreciate your comments, always so kind.
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« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2024, 08:30:06 AM »
Good morning @moraamarolaloba,

There are always interesting musical elements and lyrical observations to your work.  There's an uneasiness to the music here and I'm sure that this is your intention.  The lyrics convey your observations of life, at times commenting on the many actions that we all take for granted yet are aspects of living.  From the breath that we take to the poetic observation of the fog that wraps around the street lamp.  The street lamp image is in my opinion, the strongest lyric here.  I don't observe a strong lyrical message but note that it is fascinating how you turn every day observations into a story that engulfs the listener and invites us all to think more deeply about our day to day lives and actions.  It clearly says "I am here, i have lived and these are my observations".

Paul

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« Reply #6 on: May 31, 2024, 01:52:15 PM »
This sound pretty current on a pop level really
Yup were all running , nice job Mora

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« Reply #7 on: May 31, 2024, 05:19:02 PM »
Good morning @moraamarolaloba,

There are always interesting musical elements and lyrical observations to your work.  There's an uneasiness to the music here and I'm sure that this is your intention.  The lyrics convey your observations of life, at times commenting on the many actions that we all take for granted yet are aspects of living.  From the breath that we take to the poetic observation of the fog that wraps around the street lamp.  The street lamp image is in my opinion, the strongest lyric here.  I don't observe a strong lyrical message but note that it is fascinating how you turn every day observations into a story that engulfs the listener and invites us all to think more deeply about our day to day lives and actions.  It clearly says "I am here, i have lived and these are my observations".

Paul

Hola @Paul V 
Thank you so much!!!
I consider this song to be very abstract and I am surprised that it is more widely accepted than my other songs...
The lines are simple, there are no convoluted or deep words, just describing someone running in the cold night, leaving the vapor of her breath in the air, the fog dressing the lights with faint gauze, streets and more streets, everything is normal except for who is running or fleeing. And suddenly, "The Rose of Winds is asleep in the bones of yesterday"?

The current world moves very fast but... towards the past, the North is lost, that is my metaphor, the woman runs forward.

As for the arrangement; I like it and handle it well in my ears, the rhythm is important but above all the atmospheres created, I like to fantasize with sounds, I am very gypsy.

See you!!!

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« Reply #8 on: May 31, 2024, 09:38:17 PM »
Yes, Yes, Yes!

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« Reply #9 on: June 02, 2024, 11:01:08 AM »
This sound pretty current on a pop level really
Yup were all running , nice job Mora

Hola chico!! Ya te digo! I ended up very tired after recording myself running in the place... I did it in one go!  I am a professional escape artist hahaha. Have a good day there!!! @Elvis Nash
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« Reply #10 on: June 04, 2024, 10:12:01 AM »
I did not know that to live we had to die so many times
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