I liked it overall a lot, however MIX wise the high end guitar to me gives it a very brittle and constant linear feel ( like U2 which I hate where the "EDGE", the "Side", "Angle" or whatever he happens to be calling himself these days always has an overiding constant ongoing timbre over the track)--- and the vocals I would have liked more to the front of the mix. The vocals are GOOD, and would like to hear more of them, and maybe even copy and paste one, and pan it a bit. I have Not listened in headphones yet to the track so maybe that is why I am getting a very Linear, Middle stage Image.
Having said that it's some great lyrics, has balls, moves along like an 80's Vibe...a Nice bit of songwriting, congratulations!
I would love to hear it with a more natural vocal more up front, more natural drums and bass, and less of the reeling over the top guitar.
Be fun to hear some more mixes. This song is the kind of song you can make go in so many different directions on what you leave out in the first verse, what fader you bring up in the second verse, etc etc...you have a lot of fun tracks to experiment with...have fun.
Cheers!
From the Hudson Valley of New York State USA.
Cheers!