Hey, my second batch of lyrics in 2 days (I don't know if I'm allowed to post this many, if I'm not give me the shout and I'll remove
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) I said I was going to write a lot more frequently!
This one's chorus popped up in my head when I was watching the voice, not a clue why, but it just happened, so I put pen to paper and this is what popped out!
I added some chords so you can see the idea I was trying to go for, and if you wanted to see how it sounds, I was doing a fairly upbeat picking pattern, until the bridge where it slows and is sang nice and slow:)
EDIT: Removed the chords as they just confused people :p
EDIT #2: Changed the explicit words - Thanks GTB
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Please note: At some places it may seem like the lyrics wouldn't fit into the line, but they do, just got to sing very very quickly or slowly - which I love to do anyway
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Any criticism would be appreciated!
Verse 1
I heard he messed with your head
Chose somebody else instead
I heard he wasted your time
The time for loving, turned out that you're being mislead
Verse 2
I heard he messed with your mind
You took a knife in the back from behind
I heard you're not want he wants your
not what he needs so he left you alone to just die
Pre Chorus
But I ain't like that I'll help you fight back
I'll give you all that you need
Chorus
Cause I wanna be with you
I wanna see like you
So come on and let me through
Now tell me that you want me too
I wanna be with you
I wanna see like you
So come on let me through
And tell me that you want me too
Verse 2
I heard he messed with your soul
Left you alone in a hole
I heard he threw you to the start
from tip to toe, your body is cold, took the love out of your heart
Verse 3
I heard he messed with your personality
he tried to make you see your darker side
Pre Chorus
But I ain't like that, I'll help you fight back
I'll give you all that you need
Bridge
Because I heard he messed with your heart
I heard that he tore you apart
And now listen to me, a cup of tea if you're willing to try and restart
Chorus
Cause I wanna be with you
I wanna see like you
So come on and let me through
Now tell me that you want me too
I wanna be with you
I wanna see like you
So come on and let me through
And tell me that you want me too