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Liamsteeles

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« on: October 25, 2015, 10:30:31 PM »
Yolo is the motto that stands for you only live once,
but what if you could rewind time so that that moment wouldn't be lost,
what if you could freeze time and then move along,
no words on the page, but I guess this is still a song.

Back from the dead, but I am not a zombie,
been tip toeing past security personnel located in the lobby,
maybe breaking and entering shouldn't be a hobby,
oh well, I'm still gonna take all this money and spend it like I hit the lottery.

Yaya Toure'd the free kick right in the top corner,
wondering how and why money is no object to these footballers,
wondering if they even care about the love of the game and all these supporters,
or if they only infatuated with the lifestyle and the fame, glory and all the fortunes.

Been getting high of life, so I don't need drugs,
I don't wanna listen to that talk, so I put in my ear plugs,
been getting milk from the fridge to pour into these cups,
every morning I need a cup of tea as soon as I wake up.

Thing's that have been taken, doesn't necessarily mean they've already been took,
it comes down to if you have a spine, that is the page turner, much just like a book,
caught them with the bait, now they caught on the hook,
bring my landing net Jimmy, we got us a big one,
a real fisherman is one who releases his catch back to freedom.

Getting a bit chilly out here, I think it's nearing winter,
no wonder why these wolves out here acting so bitter,
throw you to the tigers, crocodiles and  the gorillas,
but the king of the jungle will always be Simba.

I was born a loser, but I turned myself into a winner,
now I know I'm not a professional, but you can't label me a beginner,
all these other writers be looking at me licking their lips like I am dinner,
because I get a frosty reception when I post on here that's why I wore this Chinchilla,
and you can check the bio if you really want a description.

Vintage54

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« Reply #1 on: October 25, 2015, 11:58:46 PM »

    Man!
     I f***ing love this, was just gonna post a comment on your last one, and say how disappointed i was , compared to your earlier posts, too many throw away lines. But this, in my humble opinion is the best thing you've come up with so far. I'll say it again, LOVE IT!

                                  Thanks
                                       vintage54

Neil C

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« Reply #2 on: November 01, 2015, 09:26:36 AM »
really good, I'm hearing a rap or talking poetry hear, but no matter how its delivered Vintage is right great stuff.
 :)
Neil
songwriter of no repute..