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Nick Ryder


Hi all.

I have posted a demo version of this previously, but this is now the final version which is being released on all the streaming platforms.

It's a very simple and yet complex song. What I mean by that is the melody is intentionally simple as I wanted to create something catchy and melodic. However, to make it more interesting I change the song key several times throughout the song and even go from. a major to a minor key in two sections.

Listening back, I do not think the key changes are too obvious which is exactly what I wanted.

As for the lyrics, its a simple tale about how as humans, we do not listen to each others points of view and arguments enough.

The older I get, the more I feel that if we understood more about views which conflict with our own, then the world would be a much happier place.

This is the first time I have ever co-produced a song. Steve, the guy who plays drums on this worked with me on the arrangement and he also brought in a bass player to record the bass part. Usually, I play everything on my songs.

I think the production benefits from me involving others. Steve also mixed it in his studio.

V1
Listen to the words I have to say
Even if you don't agree well ok
But listen to me now
Listen to me now

V2
Everyone has got their point of view
Opinions differ, that's just what we do
Listen to me now
I'm listening to you

V3
Going round in circles every day
Ignoring every word we have to say
Then we all complain
We're not listening again

Guitar Solo

Middle A
I'm really lost I don't know what to do
I'd walk a million miles now in your shoes
But I don't know what that would go to prove 

V4
Listen to your friends well that's just fine
Feels like you are messing with my mind
I'm trying to be kind
You don't listen any time

Middle B
I'm really lost I don't know what to say
I try but you don't listen anyway
I feel like I should turn and walk away

V5
Listen to me now before I leave
You did this to yourself don't be deceived
You made a big mistake
You won't listen anyway

V5
Everyone has got a masterplan
And we should try to listen when we can
Listen to the world
Try to understand


icystorm

This is an excellent release, Nick. I enjoyed the earlier demo of the song last year, but you've taken the finalized track to the next level! Regarding the key changes, they blend in nicely with no issues. The sound is great! :D

The lead-in is very interesting and immediately grabs one's attention in a good way. The music, vocals, and mix are excellent throughout the song! The lyrics fit well and convey a wonderful sentiment, especially for the times we live in. I enjoyed listening. Great song! Bravo Zulu to you and everyone involved! :D

Cheers,
Joseph
 

Nick Ryder

Thank you so much.

For the guitar lead lines, I tried to make them simple and memorable so they were part of the 'hook'.

It was really fun to record and also work with other artists for a change.

Vicki

I absolutely love this! It's a great topic and sentiment. The music is lively and catchy. The lyrics are wonderful. No nits from me!
Vicki aka CaliaMoko aka Mom aka Grandma aka Sweetie

Nick Ryder

Quote from: Vicki on Feb 09, 2025, 05:09 PMI absolutely love this! It's a great topic and sentiment. The music is lively and catchy. The lyrics are wonderful. No nits from me!

Thank you so much. What you've described is exactly what I was aiming for :)

songsmith

Hi Nick,
Great songwriting. Competent and professional performace, well recorded. Ticking a lot of boxes for me. :D

Elvis Nash

Its quiet catchy , a real drummer does make a difference , Yes its behooves to work with other players for more input and ideas . Nice job Nick