Take On The Fire

[IronKnee]

"Take On The Fire" was written as a warning to all those who would fall into the world of creation with artificial intelligence. A.I. is the new and exciting fad, and the fascination with this technology assures its foothold in our psyches. The promise of easy artistic works will lead us down a road of creative dependence. It has already begun.
 

"Take On The Fire"
Words & Music By Tom Tognaci

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Take on the fire; the fire will take you
You play the game, boy, but the rules weren't meant for you
Step in the box, and the box will shut you in
Cut you off before you can begin

Take on the fire; into the flames you go
Just be careful, boy; it's a world you'll never know
And how you'll yearn for that thing no one can teach
Always close, but always out of reach

And I know you know better, but it's the game you have to play
Beware those puppet strings when the spotlight blinds your way

Take on the fire; it's here and all the rage
Yes, it's tempting, boy; it's the start of a brand-new age
And you'll go on, only to one day feel
Rather numb to all that was once real

And I know you know better, but it's the game you have to play
Beware those puppet strings when the spotlight blinds your way

Take on the fire; into the flames you go
Just be careful, boy, as the flames begin to grow
Take on the fire, by the time you feel its burn
The time will be long past the point of no return

[Nick Ryder]

Hi, Tom.

A few years ago they released an album of demo's by George Harrison called 'Early Takes volume 1'.

Its a thing of beauty as it contains demo's of unreleased songs and very early versions of some of his hits.

This recording sounds like it could be on that album and whilst the melody is completely different, this song has a feel of Isn't it a Pity, which is one of my favourite tracks by Harrison.

What I am getting around to saying is that I really like this song.

Also, given the subject matter I think its a stroke of genius that you chose to present it as just guitar and vocal, this illustrating the art of human creation.

Good stuff.

[Vicki]

Timely topic. I suspect, like every other "advance" in technology, people will take advantage of the opportunity to relax and let something else do the work. Nice job.

[Mora Amaro La Loba]

Hola @IronKnee
I love your song, it's so realistic!!! The lyrics are great, they describe the story really wel, good and bad, black and white... he other side of Light.

I really like the atmosphere created between your voice and the guitar, I don't know what reverb or effect you use, although I think you've put an FX on your voice? It sounds very intimate, close.

I'm scared of AI, not because of the unexpected things that can happen... you can think of anything, but because I get the feeling that in the end the creation is not going to be human, and with that I mean that it will lack the density of the emotion of the heart that beat in many words that we write when we create, is it as if they were suddenly going to put a uniform on creativity?

Well, going back to your song, a very good story.

[IronKnee]

Hi, Tom.

A few years ago they released an album of demo's by George Harrison called 'Early Takes volume 1'.

Its a thing of beauty as it contains demo's of unreleased songs and very early versions of some of his hits.

This recording sounds like it could be on that album and whilst the melody is completely different, this song has a feel of Isn't it a Pity, which is one of my favourite tracks by Harrison.

What I am getting around to saying is that I really like this song.

Also, given the subject matter I think its a stroke of genius that you chose to present it as just guitar and vocal, this illustrating the art of human creation.

Good stuff.

Thank you very much, Nick, for such a generous comparison. I really appreciate the support. I'm glad you liked it.

Timely topic. I suspect, like every other "advance" in technology, people will take advantage of the opportunity to relax and let something else do the work. Nice job.

Hi Vicky....nice to see ya. And thanks for stopping by!

Hola @IronKnee
I love your song, it's so realistic!!! The lyrics are great, they describe the story really wel, good and bad, black and white... he other side of Light.

I really like the atmosphere created between your voice and the guitar, I don't know what reverb or effect you use, although I think you've put an FX on your voice? It sounds very intimate, close.

I'm scared of AI, not because of the unexpected things that can happen... you can think of anything, but because I get the feeling that in the end the creation is not going to be human, and with that I mean that it will lack the density of the emotion of the heart that beat in many words that we write when we create, is it as if they were suddenly going to put a uniform on creativity?

Well, going back to your song, a very good story.

Hi M....I feel the same way you do. I just don't trust the circle of people who are promoting and developing A.I
Thanks for always checking out my new stuff. You are the best!

[ChrisPrice]

Great song Tom.

AI generated music is one of the reasons why been lying low of late. Folks can do what they want, but I don't want anything to do with it. AI in the bigger picture is scary. In the wrong hands, the potential harm is unimaginable.

Sorry, I'm supposed to be reviewing your song! The verse chords remind me of something by The Beatles, though I can't remember which song. No problem with that! It's up to your usual standard and I love it.

[Enemcy]

Very earnest, I do really appreciate lyrics inspired by a specific issue written in a way which can be applied to many scenarios.

I could see people latching on to this about investing time into any endeavour, whether than being AI usage in music, career goals or entering a new relationship.

"And I know you know better, but it's the game you have to play
Beware those puppet strings when the spotlight blinds your way"

Musically you personify your message, simple but beautiful music and vocals enshrined with authenticity.

[tboswell]

Thought provoking lyrics and a raw performance, full of feeling and real humanity.
I know that sense of realising you are suddenly out of your depth and can't go back.
Making me think....
Which all very much appeals to me. Lovely!

[IronKnee]

Great song Tom.

AI generated music is one of the reasons why been lying low of late. Folks can do what they want, but I don't want anything to do with it. AI in the bigger picture is scary. In the wrong hands, the potential harm is unimaginable.

Sorry, I'm supposed to be reviewing your song! The verse chords remind me of something by The Beatles, though I can't remember which song. No problem with that! It's up to your usual standard and I love it.

Hi Chris......thanks for stopping by. Like you, AI, in the big picture, makes me a bit suspicious. In the wrong hands, it could be terrible.
AI used as a song tool, is a bit disingenuous. When AI writes a melody and/or lyric using only a prompt, it takes away the creative initiative away from people. People are already arguing the grounds that the AI creation is their intellectual property.
SAD.
Glad you liked the tune.....simple 3 chord progression. I was thinking Pink Floyd, rather than The Beatles.

Very earnest, I do really appreciate lyrics inspired by a specific issue written in a way which can be applied to many scenarios.

I could see people latching on to this about investing time into any endeavour, whether than being AI usage in music, career goals or entering a new relationship.

"And I know you know better, but it's the game you have to play
Beware those puppet strings when the spotlight blinds your way"

Musically you personify your message, simple but beautiful music and vocals enshrined with authenticity.

Hey there Enmecy...thanks for listening and for that very nice critique. I must return the favor.

Thought provoking lyrics and a raw performance, full of feeling and real humanity.
I know that sense of realising you are suddenly out of your depth and can't go back.
Making me think....
Which all very much appeals to me. Lovely!

Thanks T....I appreciate you listening and commenting.

[Rightly]

hi
I've listened to this a few times
It's great throughout
General sentiment is super

I like those sustained notes at the end of each verse
Has a bit of a psychedelic vibe at times

I'd cover it if I had the chords.  that's a rare thing

this is easily the best of the last three I've heard from you!!
All the best!

[IronKnee]

hi
I've listened to this a few times
It's great throughout
General sentiment is super

I like those sustained notes at the end of each verse
Has a bit of a psychedelic vibe at times

I'd cover it if I had the chords.  that's a rare thing

this is easily the best of the last three I've heard from you!!
All the best!

Hey there Rightly... thanks for listening and commenting.
It's a funny thing, perception. I was so disappointed with this that I almost didn't post it.
I'm glad you like it. I would love for you to cover the song. The chords are: D  E7  G
One of my most simple progressions.
Thanks, again!

[Boydie]

@IronKnee - great subject to tackle, and I also appreciated the choice of a simple "guitar and vocal" approach, which works perfectly

I think with a bit of subtle production, this could sound "epic" - i.e. a bit of EQ on the guitar to tame some of the "boominess", and some EQ and compression on the vocal to eek out the intimacy in the vocal

But all in all - great stuff

[IronKnee]

@IronKnee - great subject to tackle, and I also appreciated the choice of a simple "guitar and vocal" approach, which works perfectly

I think with a bit of subtle production, this could sound "epic" - i.e. a bit of EQ on the guitar to tame some of the "boominess", and some EQ and compression on the vocal to eek out the intimacy in the vocal

But all in all - great stuff

Hey there Boydie....thanks for listening and commenting. I have to agree that the recording is awful.... the booming was something I just couldn't get rid of. That particular guitar I used didn't quite pull it off for me. But I record and post my songs highlighting the writing, and not my production prowess. I wish I could partner with someone having those skills.
Anyways.... thanks again for stopping by!!
                                                   -T

[muso1070]

Loved the rawness here my kind of thing. Beautiful tune and well sung with that great vocal.
Good stuff

[IronKnee]

Loved the rawness here my kind of thing. Beautiful tune and well sung with that great vocal.
Good stuff

Thanks.... I appreciate it!