Long Silent Heart

[idunno]

A bit dated now, this was a WIP from some years back that I never brought forward. Not sure it even has a place in today's muse.

https://app.box.com/s/mrwgmnokpfadaby8jkvb8fqv2p1q9rsb

[snargleplax]

Makes me think of Peter, Paul, and Mary. I think the lyrics flow nicely to the point where the title occurs.

[Vicki]

Very pretty. A nice 1+1...and I would also like to hear a version with some more build. I like the contrast of the chorus, and another bump up for the second verse would be nice. Since you posted this on the "In Progress" board, I suspect you'll be doing more with production at some point.

I like the song as is; I think it flows nicely.

Vicki

[idunno]

Thanks for the listen.

snargleplax - PP&M fits. I'm from that era of musical influence; especially Noel (Paul) Stookey's music.

Vicki - Yes, your suspicion is correct. That's why it's here in this forum; to get feedback. I hear a build up in this song, as I do in most of what I write, but putting it out there back when it was written (2006) for collaborators wasn't a good bet. Perhaps now, with a much more expansive online reach, there may be collaborative interest in this. Maybe I'll post it on this site's collaboration forum and see.