Yo Bankie,welcome to the forum,man.
I really like the overall feel to this song. I'm a sucker for melodic rock.
The chorus is great,catchy as. Very well sung and put together,fine harmonies.
Sure enough a good production will make the song shine,but the song is strong and that's the prime starting point.
Great listen,ta for posting.
Liked and reposted on s/c
Edit...I've been checking out your other songs on soundcloud,some fine choons on there,laddie. You are a prolific writer for sure!