Trying something new with this one. Wrote it in the key of E, which is a key I usually don't use that much, but it fitted my voice kinda great. Experimenting a little with my style of writing these days, here with a 3 line verse, twice, and a short powerful chorus. When I get the time to record it I will drop it here on the forum
Any thoughts or suggestion on the lyrics itself, or any ideas on my style and some cool keys it can be worth having a look at?
Be MineYour lips on my cheek
Say you’re waiting for me
To come sweep you off your feet
Your hand inside of mine
I could stay here for the rest of time
If you’ll just say you’ll be mine
Oh baby, just say you’ll be mine
Oh baby, I’ll give you all my time
If you’ll just be mine
You’re here with me
In this room waiting patiently
For me to say that I’ll love you
If it’s right I don’t know
Time spent together will show
Every question that you’re asking for
Oh baby, just say you’ll be mine
Oh baby, I’ll give you all my time
If you’ll just be mine
Instrumental Break (oh's)(Last chorus, a little quieter/slower playing)Oh baby, just say you’ll be mine
Oh baby, I’ll give you all my time
If you’ll just be mine