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What would you dream
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Jazz101
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Re: What would you dream
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Reply #15 on:
June 04, 2024, 09:31:44 PM »
Hi CCB,
thanks for the comments, they are very much appreciated, we are always learning and don't always get it right, so thanks again,
George
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Maya Clars
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Re: What would you dream
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June 11, 2024, 04:31:43 PM »
@Jazz101
High-quality professional studio sound. Beautiful vocal duet!
The song sounds good!
MC
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Jazz101
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Re: What would you dream
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June 11, 2024, 05:06:50 PM »
Hi MC,
thank you for your comments, they are very much appreciated, we are all still learning so it is great to get positive feedback,
George
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Jazz101
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Re: What would you dream
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June 13, 2024, 03:59:12 PM »
Apologies CCB,
I really thought I had answered you, thank you for your comments, very much appreciated, as I always say we are all still learning so any advice is valuable,
George
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calafinestrat
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Re: What would you dream
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June 14, 2024, 06:54:46 AM »
@Jazz101
Lovely song, nice gentle voice and good lyrics. The production is spot on. I think maybe some strings would be a nice addition to lift it in places.
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Jazz101
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June 14, 2024, 01:31:23 PM »
Hi,
Thank your for your feedback, it really is appreciated,
George
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rightly
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Re: What would you dream
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June 15, 2024, 12:15:40 PM »
This is an excellent song and
It's all there regarding performance and production
Really very endearing.
It's just this
"Renember you're not alone" sentiment
Hits my funnybone
When writing or producing, it requires exclusive hyperfocus of me
And im often reminded I'm not alone in a very domestic way
This results in a full song production that might take a guilt loaded 6 months
When it used to take an enjoyable 2 - 3 weeks, 😮
I'm ramblin
Well done on this fine song !!
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