[Maya Clars]

Hey everyone! My new song is out with a new music video!
I wrote this song a year ago and was able to finish it a month ago. I was thinking for a while about finishing the song, but I think I made the right decision as the song turned out exactly as I wanted it to be heard.

The music video was also fun to make... it was super hot! Uh!

I will be glad to read your reviews of this song/music video!
Thank you so much in advance.

LYRICS:

Hmm-m, hm
Hmm-m, hmm

Oh, hey!
It's gotta be morning
Just another day
With occupied worries
Glad you raised me up
With intimate stories
You were my hero
My twin soul

Calling me baby
Giving me daisies
Showing me only smiling faces
Adoring your figure
Someone I could rely on
Was selling my heart
Neglecting my desires

I know I love you
But
(ah-ah ah)
(ah-ah ah)
There are million excuses
To give up
(ah-ah ah)
(ah-ah ah)
Can be offended and hurt
I really did so bad
It's just not easy to talk
When you're emotionally sad
I know I love you
But

Oh, hey!
It's gotta be evening
Waiting for the one to come up
Who's not leaving
Keeping girl's heart so hot
Without bleeding
Reaching the high edge of
Purest souls
(Ah!)

Calling me baby
Giving me daisies
Showing me only smiling faces
Adoring your figure
Someone I could rely on
Was selling my heart
Neglecting my desires

I know I love you
But
(ah-ah ah)
(ah-ah ah)
There are million excuses
To give up
(ah-ah ah)
(ah-ah ah)
Can be offended and hurt
I really did so bad
It's just not easy to talk
When you're emotionally sad
I know I love you
But
(I love you, I love you)
(I love you!)

Tell me are you hurt
When you're sleeping all alone?
Feeling sore while being healthy
Breaking feet on solid floor
Are you here?
Or do you hear me?
Running far away from you
Milling roads and
Cutting stitches
You can find me
Where are you

Calling me baby
Giving me daisies
Showing me only smiling faces
Adoring your figure
Someone I could rely on
Was selling my heart
Neglecting my desires

Calling me baby
Giving me daisies
Showing me only smiling faces
Adoring your figure
Someone I could rely on
Was selling my heart
Neglecting my desires

[Paul V]

@Mayaclars

From the opening chords,  I know that there is a masterful songwriter at work.  This is laden with emotional honesty, melody and talent.  I have absolutely nothing more to say!

Paul

[PaulAds]

This is fabulous.

You're such a great talent...the video is excellent too...I guess the continuity is a little off, whereby your shirt comes off and goes back on again in different shots...but that's neither here nor there really!

Maybe the best song of yours I've heard...and if it isn't, then you're even better than I think you are.

Please remember your old songwriter forum buddies when you hit the big time!

You deserve to hit the big time.

[Elvis Nash]

thats the way to do it , promote yourself , good job !!

[MonnoDB]

Very catchy and lovely smooth production @Maya Clars - another great song from you. Like the others, I keep expecting to hear you've taken off and I fully believe you have the talent to do so with the opportunities.

Great stuff.

K

[Bankie]

So happy that you have this published on YT Music so I can listen to it on the go. This is right up my street and as good or better than any other new music I've listened to recently. So many great ideas, and a lesson on how it's done

[moraamarolaloba]

Hola @Maya Clars

Hip Hip Hurra!  You are champion, this one, as well as the video, have something so special!! Very actual, feminine, naive, so many nice words I could use to define what sensations this song it provokes. Felicidades!!! Me ha encantado

[PeteS]

As ever Maya, I love your stuff.  Funny thing is, it's not what I generally listen to.

Question is what now?  You are very talented and somehow need to attract a bigger audience.

Good luck Maya!

[kevysc]

@Maya Clars  I can only agree with what others have said: great song, great production, great vocal, great lyrics and great video ... in short, it's great

Kevin