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PEACEFUL BLUE WATERS

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« on: July 23, 2024, 03:47:48 AM »


Catfish ROLLING on A glassy lake
Waterfowl ACTING like they own THE place
Swallows DANCING in the wind
Two Otters GOING for a swim
A few deer BLOCKING my dirt road
NO HURRY NO PLACE TO GO
Ch
I US’TA FLY by billboard signs
HEAR GUNSHOTS in the middle of the night
SIRENS SCREAMING in the fast lane
I was ALL caught up in the rat-race
BUT I FINALLY FOUND OUT WHAT MATTERS
HERE WHERE SOFT GREEN pastures
PUSH UP AGAINST
PEACEFUL BLUE WATERS
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This small town is like a Rockwell painting
Rusty ole tractors feral cats playing
Fishing boats PARKED by a bait store
EVERYTHING THE SAME AS A CENTURY before
FAST FOOD AND DRIVE-THRU’S nonexistent
A stray dog stops for a visit
Ch
Bridge
THERE’S a small church up on a hill
CLOSEST SPOT TO HEAVEN far as I can tell
ch
I US’TA FLY by billboard signs
HEAR GUNSHOTS in the middle of the night
SIRENS SCREAMING in the fast lane
I was ALL caught up in the rat-race
BUT I FINALLY FOUND OUT WHAT MATTERS
HERE WHERE SOFT GREEN pastures
PUSH UP AGAINST
PEACEFUL BLUE WATERS
PEACEFUL BLUE WATERS
PEACEFUL BLUE WATERS








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« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2024, 09:49:24 AM »
Hola chico
It is a powerful production, the chorus sounds great, it emits an almost "ferocious" energy, well, in reality it is a scream that flies over the blue calm of the lake; it has been like giving me batteries, I was filled with energy, very good job, Those waters are doing you good. @Elvis Nash
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« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2024, 02:39:41 PM »
singing in a studio at 90 degree heat , I almost passed out , fun stuff. Can we steal a melody from AI robots ? sure is Sony suing me ? kinda doubt it . Oh Nashville session players all that jazz . Real good African gospel singers on BGVs . I was impressed .



thanks Mora

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« Reply #3 on: July 24, 2024, 09:00:03 PM »
Loving that sound and arrangement. That style of singing is rarely something that would grab me, but this one did. What a great song, and great execution. Nothing to nitpick.

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« Reply #4 on: July 24, 2024, 10:19:59 PM »
its the gospel singers , they blend real well , Best I've used so far.
thanks man

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« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2024, 09:12:56 AM »
@Elvis Nash Fantastic production and love the energy in the way you deliver the lyrics. Country but with a lot of originality. Definitely radio ready and should be on the charts in Nashville IMHO Kevin

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« Reply #6 on: July 27, 2024, 10:50:17 AM »
ha ha ha , thanks man , radio would never play me . As far as originality, if you hammer out 200 to 400 songs eventually you're going to sound like yourself and not the heroes you've worshipped. Thanks again