Hello, forum friends.
Here's a song I am trying to get over the line. Please excuse the rough mix. Looking for feedback on any changes, additions before I finish it off
He dreams of lazy mornings
When the kids are still in bed
And his wife is making breakfast
But its all just in his head
She gets the train on Mondays
And it takes her to the edge
Of the universe he came from
But that’s not what he said
We sometimes wonder, and we change the rules,
But they’re never broken then its, back to school
We leave the dishes, until they break the sink
There are no plates to eat from
Guess its time to think, there’s a missing link,
Guess its time to have another drink
She gets the bus on Tuesdays, into the heart of town
And the drivers always cheerful, she’s never seen him frown
He loves the park on Fridays
And he goes there for a smoke
But the pigeons eat the butt ends, ‘till they start to choke
We sometimes wonder, and we change the rules,
But they’re never broken then its, back to school
We leave the dishes, until they break the sink
There are no plates to eat from
Guess its time to think, there’s a missing link,
Guess its time to have another drink
And now we see, the world and how life’s really meant to be
There’s nobody there at the end of the phone
The kids have gown up and you’re all on your own
There is a draft at the top of the stairs
And no-one remembers your birthday or cares
And so the lights are fading
We watch see all go out
As the driver pulls up in the station,
Smiles and then clocks out
We sometimes wonder, and we change the rules,
But they’re never broken then its, back to school
We leave the dishes, until they break the sink
There are no plates to eat from
Guess its time to think, there’s a missing link,
Guess its time to have another drink