Hi vibesville
This is my response to your post of August 06. I'm sorry about answering so late.
I do not understand your reaction to what I said about rhyme. However, please feel free to ignore what I say because I am not competent within the arts anyway.
Thanks for explaining about "oh it's a dream come true". I understand now. Sorry — my mistake.
Thanks for explaining about Billy. Actually, I thought that he was a criminal and that the 'I' person was a former criminal, now going straight. It seems you are right about my not getting it! Perhaps my school-english is inadequate for understanding the kind of English in the lyrics.
I'm sorry if my review has offended you. In the future, I'll try to be more careful with what I say and gentler in the way I express criticism.