Clear production for the most part. You have clipped the piano and the vocal in places (unless the samples are flawed to start with?) Not sure how without seeing your chain, but there are myriad artefacts darted around. Be careful with levels and compression settings
Well James now, I really need a translator here!!! This is what I want to improve on too, I just compress the whole song afterwards, so I can get it louder that's it, am I not supposed to do that? (I know please be patient!!!)
I think the title of this song sums it up very well. It's very simple yet the powerful song. I really enjoy the chorus purely for the fact that there are no complex metaphors etc its straight to the point and I think that's what makes it so powerful, along with the chords.
I completely agree with Boydie's comment on sound cloud the intro is beautiful, I was pulled in after only a few seconds. I am a sucker for soft melodic songs.
Keep doing what you're doing!
Thank you, I really can't write lyrics any other way...
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one day maybe!) I always seem to feature the piano eventually!
Boydie, your post is too long (but very helpful) to quote,yet it's full of useful of advice for which I am very grateful by the way and will definitely implement
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I think you are right about that first chorus too! I just shrivel when it comes to building a bigger production... gulp!
Always a pleasure to hear your songs Flossie
I just love you voice and your spirit - you get a feel for people on here - an intuition and I think you are a great person
Now the song - brilliant - the melody floats over the top of the chords like a wind surfer
This is commercial balladry at its highest level - should be the x factor winners song and I mean that as a compliment
Andy
Kaf you are particularly lovely, This is definitely a mutual admiration!!! Thank you so much for the boost, I've missed you where have you been? Oh and I love your use of imagery above (windsurfer!) , write me some lyrics right now!!!
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