Is This Goodbye? Song Constructive Criticism Request

[philliphoward847]

Hi all,

I hope you're doing well! I'm currently working on a song and would really appreciate your constructive feedback. Specifically, I'd love to know:

Does the song need any improvements or adjustments? Is there any empty space in the song that needs to be filled? Would it help to add a synth background in the first verse? Do you think the song is catchy enough, or does it need a stronger hook?

Your insights would mean a lot to me!

https://soundcloud.com/perennialaims/1a1?si=be773f80f029479fa697bc6d8683b007&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Thanks so much for your time.

[ChrisPrice]

I enjoyed this. Some very nice guitar playing and a strong vocal. I think you could add some more instrumentation, but nothing that detracts from what's already happening. I'm not sure about the clapping or whatever the percussion is I'm hearing later in the track..that sounds a bit out of place to me. Otherwise, a lovely track.

[philliphoward847]

Updated progress:

https://soundcloud.com/perennialaims/demo-wdrums?si=a7cf84cf1b3547439a99d6f88461915d&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing