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[Nick Ryder]

Evening.

I've spent quite a bit of time on this one trying to craft the melody, chord sections and structure so that it keeps the listeners interest, but I still don't think it's quite there yet.

It changes key several times which I like, but perhaps too many times?

Anyway, here it is and looking forward to feedback.

https://on.soundcloud.com/Z1NGgVeou31YbKDdA

[icystorm]

Evening.

I've spent quite a bit of time on this one trying to craft the melody, chord sections and structure so that it keeps the listeners interest, but I still don't think it's quite there yet.

It changes key several times which I like, but perhaps too many times?

Anyway, here it is and looking forward to feedback.

https://on.soundcloud.com/Z1NGgVeou31YbKDdA

@Nick Ryder  This is really excellent, Nick. I can hear the subtle and more pronounced differences compared to the previous demo version you shared on the old site. The earlier version was fine, and this update is even better. It sounds ready to my ears. It's a great song musically, lyrically, and vocally. Nice work, my friend! 

[Magpie138]

Hey, just listend to this and a couple of others you have done, it's a great song and you have all the elements in place, the melody is great.It all works well, however for me the one thing i did pick up on, is the mix, i get that this is a sound your happy and aiming for. but to my years the mix is a little muddy, you obviously have a good voice but it seems to get lost a little in the music. and there  was points where i was concentrating either on the the music or the vocal. but please don't see this as critisism, it's just that i do a far bit of, mixing and i can get bit anal about it. but all in all some great work your doing. 

[Vicki]

I love the chord progressions in general. The key changes fit in perfectly, in my opinion. It's my kind of song. It seems to be a bit influenced by Beatles music? I like it a lot!

Vicki