Loving Her is Terminal (demo)

[icystorm]

Greetings everyone! I wrote this song late last year and recorded and produced a demo for it.

The song is part of the soundtrack of a new fictional thriller novel I'm writing about a beautiful enchantress named Omega, and her lovely apprentice named Hedra. The song itself is a warning not to fall in love with an omnipotent sorceress.

My plan for this demo and the other 15 demos I have for my book is to hire an engineer and producer to help me create finished versions of each track, possibly with studio musicians.

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Regarding the video for the song, I did not create it. I paid a videographer to produce it.

Loving Her is Terminal
Words and Music: Joseph Spain
Produced by: Joseph Spain
© 2023, 2024 Joseph Spain

--Verse 1
In less than a breath
She'll strike with her fangs
Pump her venomous charm into your veins
The princess of the night
Her darkness reigns

--Verse 2
She'll cause trauma with a thought
An aberration nature wrought
No fire in hell creates a wake like hers
Leave her undisturbed

--Pre-Chorus 1
Or you'll bleed out to nothin'
You'd better pray for the sun
If she breathes your scent you're done

--Chorus
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
And you'll die
You will die
 
--Verse 3
With the bat of her eyes
She owns all she sees
She plays to break your heart with pain
The princess of your life
Medusa reigns

--Pre-Chorus 2
If your clock ticks down to nothin'
You'd better pray for the sun
If you taste her kiss you're gone

--Chorus
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
and you'll die
You will die

--Instrumental middle

--Pre-Chorus 3
When your heart bleeds out to nothin'
You'd better pray for the sun
If she steals your soul you're gone

--Outro
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
When the night comes
Don't fall in love with her
It'll be the end of you on Earth
Her charm's invincible
Loving her is terminal
and you'll die
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
(you will die)
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
And the night you thought
You fell in love with her
Was the end of your life on Earth
Her spell's invincible
Loving her is terminal
and you'll die
Your heart can't beat it's gone flatline
(you will die)
Your fate is sealed by her design
Your case is critical
Loving her is terminal
When the night comes
Don't fall in love with her
It'll be the end of you on Earth
Her charm's invincible
Loving her is terminal
and you'll die

[Vicki]

The sound of this is engaging. I can hear it in my mind with menacing and crashing sounding production. When it's done I hope you'll post the finished product.

Vicki

[icystorm]

@Vicki -- Thank you for listening and your comments.

[DarkoGiac]

This sounds great! Very immersive. It has an almost Lynchian quality to it. Keep up the great work!

[icystorm]

This sounds great! Very immersive. It has an almost Lynchian quality to it. Keep up the great work!

@DarkoGiac -- Many thanks for listening and your kind words! A friend in Oz created a second video for the song using her skills with AI animation.

I'm looking forward to creating realistic music videos for my songs using AI once it allows me to direct the characters to act out specific actions and scenes in my songs. Hopefully soon!