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liees in your eyes

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Jane99

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« on: February 08, 2014, 09:39:00 AM »
HI:)

Firesteval i finally got a facebook page! :) So here's the link and maybe you want to leave a like at my page? ;) https://www.facebook.com/pages/My-Songs/1447908402105629?skip_nax_wizard=true#

But here are the lyrics of a new song and please tell me what you think:)

That moment in darkness
You were staring at me
I was staring at you
None dared to make a sound
To make a ove
Cause in that night
We all realized

The lies in your eyes
The lies that lasted a lifetime
The lies without a truth
The lies in your eyes

Do you know what hurts the most
We’ve rusted you a lifetime
But you played a game
Without explaining the rules
When we realized
Something is wrong
It was  the first time we saw

The lies in your eyes
The lies that lasted a lifetime
The lies without a truth
The lies in your eyes

Don’t you think it’s time for you to leave
And i wish you the best
But now just leave
Cause we all saw

The lies in your eyes
The lies that lasted a lifetime
The lies without a truth
The lies in your eyes
the lies in your eyes
the lies in your eyes

flossie

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« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2014, 09:49:48 AM »
This is really great!  You are very good at telling a story with your lyrics, now let's hear it with music!
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BooBoo

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« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2014, 03:16:21 PM »
I really like the chorus on this!
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