Pleeease feedback! I am not a native so please tell me if there are any grammatical mistakes or if there is something that sounds weird to a native ear
! Thanks!
IN LOVE WITH MY SLEEP
Every night I’m cuddling with my love affair
I am as happy as one can be (cosy)
between us lies peacefully my teddy bear
we are a perfect team of three
dont you dont you dont you dont you wake up
dont you dont you dont you wake me up (zum wecker)
Cause I`m in love with my sleep sleep sleep
and everytime it goes beep beep beep
Id like to run amok
kill the alarm clock
Cause I`m in love with my sleep sleep sleep
and everytime it goes beep beep beep
Id like to run amok
kill the alarm clock
this thing has always been my enemy
with its annoying cheeping sound
whenever my love and I are as close as close can be
it ruins our romantic harmony
Hey I`m in love with my sleep sleep sleep
and everytime it goes beep beep beep
Id like to run amok
kill the alarm clock
Cause I`m in love with my sleep sleep sleep
and everytime it goes beep beep beep
Id like to run amok
kill the alarm clock
the alarm clock
dont you dont you dont you dont you wake u u u u p
dont you dont you dont you dare to wake me u u u up (zum wecker
Cause I`m in love with my sleep sleep sleep
and everytime it goes beep beep beep
Id like to run amok
kill the alarm clock
Cause I`m in love with my sleep sleep sleep
and everytime it goes beep beep beep
Id like to run amok
kill the alarm clock