This really was my first ever effort at songwriting that I wrote on demand really for my music GCSE a couple of months ago, but I just found it and thought 'lets see what everyone thinks' so yeah, feedback is much appreciated. Cheers.
Verse 1
Oh, it’s alright, I’ll take you to my light
Why don’t you come to mine for tea?
‘Cos livings easy, but only when you close your eyes,
We’ll have lasagne, you and me
Verse 2
And when you open your eyes, everything has changed
Will it ever be the same?
‘Cos sunshine, it follows thunder, how d’you feel inside
Do you feel like you cannot shine?
Pre – Chorus
D’you feel like you never, know if you’re okay?
You go on anyway
But soon come tomorrow
‘Cos I’ve hated today
Chorus
You, cannot say, you don’t wanna drive away
To, to find a better day for…
You, cannot say, you don’t wanna drive away,
To, to find a better day for you