Hey everyone,
Thanks for the reviews.
In the end i decided to have a total rewrite of this.
Its now about a young lad who has been called to goto war.
It begins with him getting himself ready to head off to war.
at first he's happy to go but he changes his mind and decides he doesn't want to go.
but in the end he decides to go.
Hope you like it although its still unfinished and still needs a few tweeks here and there to make it flow a little better.
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He woke up in the morning
Put his boots upon his feet,
Took one last glance of the world he knew,
That surrounds his suburban street,
Then a neighbor came over to see him,
Told him what a brave man he'd become,
Cause he knew that by this time tomorrow,
he'd be on the battlefield with a loaded gun,
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as he headed into town to go off to war,
He reads the names of the soldiers the town had lost before,
Not wanting to become a statistic,
He decides its best not to risk it,
So he heads into the local forest,
And finds an area for himself to cry,
He sat there for several hours,
Hoping that the war would pass on by,
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But as the day slowly turned to night,
And the forest started loosing light,
He realized the war would soon be over,
And placed his rucksack on his shoulder.
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And so he heads to war,
Cause he's the bravest little soldier,