Hi Tom, Vintage, Paul, Jamie and Verlon,
Thanks for reading and the comments.
This is not aimed at all 'weekend dads' just the ones that show up for a couple of hours and expect some sort of medal. Most of us know someone like that. I know i do.
And Tom i'm not a muso. I just write some verses and a chorus and bridgey bit in what i call a 'serving suggestion'!
Cheers,
Phil.