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Title: With the air of a sigh
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Sep 10, 2025, 12:14 PM
Strange title?


Which among so many mists
hides that truth that sometimes screams
and sometimes only breathes?
 
What beats in my oblivion
that turns me into my executioner
without knowing what my fault is?
 
Everything is ink that fades
under the water of a tear

the portrait of a yesterday
that is still here
despite being gone
 
What good are my dreams
if there are no skies to place them in?
What good are my hands
if there is only air to hold on to?
What it's for?
 
They are words that went away
with the air of a sigh
and even if I look into my guts
I will find nothing clear
when life and its traps
turn off the light of the soul
 
Title: Re: With the air of a sigh
Post by: Rightly on Sep 11, 2025, 10:23 AM
very accessible
even though I can't understand the sung words. Lovely voice by the way!
the lyrics seem really insightful and introspective. A sad conclusion at the end.
Really imaginative. Well done Mora, you're supernatural!