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Title: Tears
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Dec 25, 2025, 06:29 PM
An impossible but true story




My windows sometimes
shifts its position

and as it does
it pulls me along
on a journey
exempt from time x2

I simply see
my reflection appear
in the glass
as if it were a mirror

looking at me
searching
for something familiar
in a landscape I don't remember x2

In those moments
I discover
that nothing remains the same
in memory
except the taste of tears

tears tears tears

transforming things
into something
close
although blurry
when it comes
to describing them

My windows sometimes
shifts its position
but madness knows
how to describe
distorted sites

she leaves me there
searching for something
familiar
in a landscape
I don't remember

tears tears tears
Title: Re: Tears
Post by: subvibe on Jan 22, 2026, 01:08 PM

Hi Mora

Great soundscape The song has a lot of suspense 
the mix is nice clear & wide 

subvibe
Title: Re: Tears
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jan 28, 2026, 08:08 PM
Quote from: subvibe on Jan 22, 2026, 01:08 PMHi Mora

Great soundscape The song has a lot of suspense
the mix is nice clear & wide

subvibe

HOla @subvibe
Thank you so much!!!!