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Title: Love me as if we were at war
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jan 17, 2026, 10:55 AM
A little bit of love to combat the glacial cold of what's happening in the world



My love
love me as if we were at war
and tomorrow
would no  longer knock
on our door
 
Love me
like a stranger
free from reproaches
and distance
free frorm the weight of the past

just take me tenderly
like I am a woman who trembles
hidden in her own shade
 
May your breath
be in mine
when I tell you my name
and the warmth
of your body
flows into mine
 
Make me wood that burns
 in the fire of your embrace
 
Title: Re: Love me as if we were at war
Post by: subvibe on Jan 22, 2026, 12:59 PM
Hi @mora
Great driving rhythm & warm bass
Love the Guitar solo & EPiano very fluent & clear
vocals build up very nice & give it a smooth feel
This song has a magical feel 

Super

subvibe