I wrote this song a while ago. I've recently added a chorus and a couple more verses.
This is a link to it on Soundcloud: https://shorturl.at/4fwEv
I'm no good at production so its just the song itself.
These are the lyrics, hope you like it.
Verse 1
The minute you stormed out the door
I knew it was over of that I was sure
I can't say I blame you, I hurt you, I shamed you
And you couldn't take it no more
Verse 2
I've done some dumb stuff in my time
I've said crazy things when I've had too much wine
But this time I blew it, immediately knew it
I must have been out of my mind.
Chorus
Hey girl you know that I'm blue
Every night I'm just Thinking of you
Come back and save me do you still crave me
You know I can mend all the pain hold you in my arms again
Let's try and make it no reason to break it.
Bridge
Hey girl I stopped drinking I ain't touched a drop
You might find it hard to believe I could stop
You think I'm a lush babe a busted old flush babe
I promise you honey I'm not
Verse3
Always went under its spell
Boozing and I were a match made in hell
Cursing accusing but never amusing
No wonder you bid me farewell
Verse 4
Please let me back in your life
I know I'm not worthy to call you my wife
If you say maybe, I promise you baby
There'll be no more trouble or strife
Chorus
Hey girl you know that I'm blue
Every night I'm just thinking of you
Come back and save me, do you still crave me
You know I can mend all the pain
Hold you in my arms again
Lets try and make it no reason to break it
One of your best songs!
@calafinestrat I enjoyed it all, love chorus!! and good lyrics.
Mora