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General Category => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: mroz on May 08, 2026, 12:30 AM

Title: hi folks; please listen to my song in progress
Post by: mroz on May 08, 2026, 12:30 AM
https://soundcloud.com/michaelrozich/dark-lotus-reprise_march-30?si=435cf845be024e87bc6c84295d9fa450&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Title: Re: hi folks; please listen to my song in progress
Post by: melroy pheasant on May 11, 2026, 02:34 PM
Really strong track, maybe needs a change coming up to the halfway point.
Title: Re: hi folks; please listen to my song in progress
Post by: dreamer0114 on May 18, 2026, 07:07 PM
My first attempt at a indie pop song. This is a reference joint as I cannot sing, but I love songwriting. Would love to have some feedback on this latest song I wrote.

Lucky Charm (reference song) (https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/9cfb00f7-f7bf-4e64-b9d2-339cf7b68f7e?sharedKey=ma9vkNcg5kerIauv9OpjkQ)