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General Category => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 12, 2026, 01:16 PM

Title: While the dreams are still nude
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 12, 2026, 01:16 PM
Hola dormant forum!! Here is my latest one, a dark song with special lyrics

https://youtu.be/R-65uD980Hs

Today is a day of tears
amidst confused thoughts,

Tragedy turned to rage
and stirs the curtains
that frame the drama


Bitter tears and grimaces
longing to be smiles
languish on the faces
as if they were a simple mask


Silences answering questions,
fears in wide open eyes,
ears that have gone deaf...

Everything and nothing
become friends
as they open together the box
of the irremediable
Reality
breaks down the doors
while the dreams
are still nude
Tragedies that smell like candles
tragedies that smell like candles
Reality
breaks down the doors
while the dreams
are still nude
Title: Re: Grimaces and Tears
Post by: Elvis Nash on May 16, 2026, 02:06 PM
Whats up Mora ? Pretty sad tune girl , but sounds great
Title: Re: Grimaces and Tears
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on May 19, 2026, 10:33 AM
Quote from: Elvis Nash on May 16, 2026, 02:06 PMWhats up Mora ? Pretty sad tune girl , but sounds great

Hmmm so many things Elvis!! But spring is here, rain is warm and fields are awaking
But the world is breaking apart, ruins we don't see but carry within us
You are not visiting the Muse?