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Title: Winter Sun
Post by: zanteboy on Jun 25, 2026, 09:38 PM
https://youtu.be/iE5hdMGNhsU?is=RBRvK2dxXhP8EXF7


Me, my guitar and GarageBand, be kind..... ;D



Winter sun warm on my skin

Feel the soft Sirocco wind

Cycle down sandy lanes

Think of home, cold and rain



Here the days drift slow and kind

Shadows long, but peace of mind

I breathe it in, let trouble run

Washed away by the winter sun



Turn a corner a change of view

A quiet thought or maybe two

I take my time, no need to run

Linger long in the winter sun
Title: Re: Winter Sun
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on Jun 26, 2026, 04:47 PM
Very nice song, maybe the voice needs a bit more level? very pleasant video too, Mediterranean Coast, Costa Brava?